your website looks fanominall its coming along great but i would suggest putting more info in all your sections on the layers of the earth and you should fix up your grammer a little but overall it looks great good job
@ Winnie - I took a quick look at your 4 layers of the Earth sections and at first glance, it looks as though you need to add more information. For example, I did not see much in regards to the temperature of each of the layers.
Also, the multimedia that you use in each of your sections must be specific to the layer you are talking about. If you can't find a video specific to each layer, then you must indicate the start time in the video where it discusses that particular section and also when it ends.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
For your buttons you should put the layers they are in inside of Earth
In the structure of Earth you should
-and a little bit of info for each layer
in the Mantle
-add way more info you have 2 sentences
-and you do not need to say this "(The mantle is the thick layer of red shown in the picture.)" it says Mantle right on the red area
in the Crust
-you need more info
-make sure you capitalize Earth
-maybe get another picture you can barely read "Crust" and if you do make sure you get ride of or change "(The crust is the thin layer of blue that is shown in the picture)"
-how deep is it under the ocean? you said just how deep it is under the continents
in the Outer Core
-add more info
-check your spelling
in the Inner Core
-maybe a picture that focuses on the Inner Core or the Core
-spelling and punctuation
overall good job
Hi ! for all of your sections the crust, mantle, Outer core, and inner core you have to put more information and you have too check your capitals and grammar but over all great job :)
Hi my name is winnie the poo I live in surry B.C.