GRAMMER:your grammer in your work is good but i think you could add a little more word structre like proper spelling and etc
INFORMATION: your information is great its really good great job but i think you could use some more info not alot ut just alittle bit
CAPITALS: Your capitals are good i see some problems but not alot great job on them though.
PUNCTUATION: I think you could work a little more on them by adding some more periods and commas and etc also some of your puctuations seem to be a little put weird and make a sentence a little off other wise great job.
media: your picture is amazing please if u could can you add a video that would be great.
Amazing work im really impressed :)
-here you spelled convergence and continental wrong "convergence, and last but not least Continential converence.".
-you didn't add all the types of convergences. you named them but they should get there own paragraph.
-here is a spelling mistake "d last but not least Continential Convergece.".
-you need to capitalize Earth and Mantle.
-Convergent also needs to be capitalized.
-Maybe here "-Oceanic Continential convergence is" and here - "Oceanic is when boundary occures in" and here "- Oceanic is when boundary occures in' you should get rid of this - and put it into paragraph form.
-you put ( on only one side "y subduction (subduction: a lithospheric plate is squeezed by force beneath another lithospheric plate.".
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Hi Winnie the Pooh!
grammar: Your grammar was good and I like how you didn’t keep on saying the same word to start a sentence so over all it was good.
Information: I like how you added the three different convergent Boundaries In your paragraphs and I like how you put it on your own words and I like how you put descriptive words that people your age can understand so if they have to do a project on it they will know what it means.
Spelling: In your second paragraph you spelled convergent wrong you forgot to put the n in convergent boundary put I think you were just typing fast and forgot to look back and see if you spelled anything wrong and over all I think your spelling was pretty good.
Capitals: In your 5th paragraph you forgot to put a capital in (if) and that’s it.
Punctuation: You had good even amount of periods so over all it was good
Media: You had a good picture you might want to put more pictures.
But over all great job☺
Grammar-Your Grammar was fine.
Information-You have good information just maybe have a separate paragraph for each of the different types of Convergent Boundary and I like that it is in your own words.
Spelling-You have a few spelling errors like convergent and continental so I suggest going over your page
Capitals-The words that need capitals but you didn't do capitals for I have listed below
4-Boundary (when it is after Convergent)
8-Lithosheric (is also not a word it should be the Lithosphere not the Lithosheric plate)
Punctuation-Your punctuation is good
Media-you may want to add another picture or a video
overall good job.
Tips-Maybe make it one paragraph instead of having the line or bullet and maybe have a separate paragraph for each of the different types of Convergent Boundary.
Hi Winnie the Pooh!
Punctuation: Your punctuation is good but could use a couple touch ups.
Grammar: Your grammar is very good!
Capitals: Your capitalization skills need work on alot of things. Work on puting capitals on Convergent Boundary as well but still good job.
Information: You have alot of information but you need to put them in your own words and not copy them, but still good.
Spelling: You have a few spelling errors on continental and convergence and continental boundary so check on those things.
Media: On media I would suggest you add one more picture or video.
Otherwise good job!
Hi my name is winnie the poo I live in surry B.C.